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March 3rd, 2015, 2:46 pm

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Reply The_Project, March 3rd, 2015, 2:46 pm

MOTION SENSE DOU!

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Reply GrovyleGoodbye128, March 4th, 2015, 8:32 am

That sitting pose is very nice~

Reply Heroin, March 10th, 2015, 5:59 pm

I gave a brief runthrough of this comic, and I shall now share my thoughts, because I can.

First off, it was very hard to get into this comic in the first place because of your first few issues. They were just...bad. Unfunny, and really drab. I would suggest remaking them, as to not deter new readers.

The next issue I really feel is how.. normal some of the characters are. Now for people like Marley, it's not that much of a problem, as main characters aren't meant to be the most abnormal ones of the bunch, but for other, less important characters, it helps to have a more interesting personality to them. Chill, from what I've seen, personally doesn't give me that much of an importance sense. I don't really feel any sort of care for her, or her relationship with marley. Characters like that need to be touched up, and made more relatable or likeable.

The action scenes and villains are good. The fight scenarios are all really nice, and only somewhat anti-climactic in certain situations.

Overall, I like your comic, Project. Kudos.

Also, I want a cameo. PM me. :)

Reply GrovyleGoodbye128, March 23rd, 2015, 9:31 am

@Heroin: I'd say that's a pretty good review, and would agree.

Reply nyancat6650, July 13th, 2015, 9:04 pm

You should update this comic soon

Reply nyancat6650, October 10th, 2015, 7:41 pm

it's been a while since this comic updated

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